Monday 13 March 2006

கோடை மழை

வறண்டுப் போன
பூமித் தாய்க்கு
வான மகள் போட்ட
வைட்டமின் ஊசிகள்.

13 comments:

neighbour said...

Nice one...

idhu chennaila peancha mazhalyooda effectuungalaaaa... kodali mazaila neniyara sugamaa sugam thaan..

oru china doubt.. paalaivanagalil yellam vaana makaluku, boomi thaai meedhu enna kobaamoo...

Ramesh said...

beautifully written..

Known Stranger said...

ஊசி துலைகலில்
முலைத்த காளான்
வறன்டு போகின்றன
வானமகளின் ஈதலில்

தாய் மீண்டும்
தனிமையில்
மகளின் ஊசி
துலைகலை ஏங்கி.

வேதா said...

@neigh,
actually eppavo ezhuthinathu,ippa timing-a post panniten.
//.. paalaivanagalil yellam vaana makaluku, boomi thaai meedhu enna kobaamoo... //
palaiyin intha gathi,
iyarkaiin niyathi.

@ramesh,
nanri.

@vaishnav,
very good, siru ezhuthu pizhzigal ullana.

Known Stranger said...

hey .. i am not good with grammar and spelling. neither in english not in tamil. always spelling mistakes will be a part and parcel of my language as well as grammar . I seriously need an editor for my thoughts.

logic said...

That was ultimate.
Mother and daughter WOW.
Good simile

Known Stranger said...

எங்கே புதிய
மழை சாறல்

Known Stranger said...

miga arumaiyana kavithai ammu.
'karuvarai kallaraiyaga
maara ethu karanam?,
pazhai pona samugamum,
ethirka thunivillatha,
sila uyirgalum'

No.... i disagreee.. it is because the fear of future

the fear of childs future or the fear of the parents future.

வேதா said...

@vaishnav,
/ fear of childs future/

athai ethirkolla thunivillai athai thaan naanum sonnen, but that wont justify infanticide.

unknown said...

nalla irukku..ninga enkayo poytinga.eppadinga ithellam..solli tharathu..

வேதா said...

@ammu,
athuva varuthu ammu athuva varuthu:)
ungalaku poi naan solli tharanuma:)

kuttichuvaru said...

aaha arputham!!

வேதா said...

@kutti,
nanri:)